I've considered getting rid of this narration, because it doesn't really mesh with the rest.

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PANEL ONE
Tim looks down at the canal, scared.
TIM (narration): September 4th, 2014 was, it turned out, the day he died.

PANEL TWO
The unnamed young man with the glasses looks at Tim with a serious look on his face.

PANEL THREE
Tim is falling into the canal.
TIM (narration): (It might have been the 5th, we'd been there a good while.)

PANEL FOUR
The unnamed young man with the beard doesn't look at Tim, his eyes closed.

PANEL FIVE
Tim hits the water, all but the top of his grimacing head now under it. The water is dark, coloured red by the stoplights.

PANEL SIX
The third man looks at Tim with a dark look on his face.

PANEL SEVEN
Only bubbles now come up out of the water. Darkness encroaches upon the edges of the panel. TIM (narration): It was gonna be a long, wet, year.

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